Crimson Tide

Crimson Tide

A Poem by Justin Fearn
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11th hour of the 11th day of the 11th month - lest we forget!

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Upon this pleasant and tolerant land,
The towers of establishment bleed with Spector
s from empire past.
The waves, suffocating - remorseless,
This crimson tide, waning but so briefly beneath the high tide mark.
Remember, oh remember the blood stained
establishments mark.

© 2015 Justin Fearn


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This is the third of your poems I read... there's an overtone or undertone to all of them and a very nice style that is your very own. Great job. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Justin Fearn

9 Years Ago

Thank you Jesse, much appreciated x
Wow, this is good really good!

"Crimson Tide" < it reminded of the High School that I attended for 11th grade.

Nicely done, thank you for sharing!

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Justin Fearn

9 Years Ago

It's weird isn't it, how a string of words conjure up thoughts. This was my commemoration to all tho.. read more

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Added on November 19, 2014
Last Updated on May 12, 2015
Tags: remembrance, war, empire, sacrifice

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Justin Fearn
Justin Fearn

Hinckley, Leicestershire, United Kingdom



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