What would I tell her.

Basically a poem I thought of the thought process that I might go through if I ever told somebody I loved them.

How would I tell her,

That I cared with all my heart

About her.

How would I tell her?

Would I say that she has great hair?

Or maybe that she knows what to wear?

Perhaps I could recite a poem

or a sonnet, or a romantic tome.

Maybe I could give her a bouquet,

of roses and other things I picked that day.

Maybe I could sing a song

like a serenade from days long gone.

Or maybe I could be me

And tell her what I really think.

I think that she is a wonderful human being

With a heart for the Lord that simply just sings.

Her smile is amazing to see.

It shows a heart with willingness to be.

A devotion to the Lord like none I've ever seen.

And such intellect, so keen.

But in the end it comes down to one thing.

I love her, because her heart makes me sing.

Author's Note

She knows the truth. She has seen the poem and given me an answer. Read "The Circle is Complete" to get an understanding of what happened.
Please review and tell me what you think.

Reviews

[Lyric]

Aawwww, this is so sweet, I literally starting cooing in front of my family, great job

[Crazycatgirl_10]

I loved reading this. You obviously love your significant other. It is shown so clearly in this.

[Miles W.]

Yeah....if I had a significant other....

[Crazycatgirl_10]

Aww. But when you do give them this...its great.

[Miles W.]

Sadly, I already have. Didn't work.

[Cameron Griffith]

Very well done poem. Used great words, and expressed a very strong meaning.

[Dee]

This is an excellent poem, well written! I especially like that you thought about what things you could give to her, and in the end, you decided to give her the greatest treasure of all, words spoken from your heart.

[SPINNING ON that dizzy ..]

She would read this and she would know. Very nice and whimsical. Kinda like plucking petals from a daisy - some wishful thinking ... with someone in mind as you think :) Good write

[imster]

Light-hearted easy read. Enjoyed it

[PurpleQuartz]

I think this poem is beautiful and that if the person you loved saw this it would touch her heart :)

[Miles W.]

Thank you madam. That means a lot to me.

[max_vonnegut]

She loves the Lord! What a great poem! Now, if a girl would not allow herself to be woo-ed by this, then she must be a robot haha! Great job sir

[Miles W.]

Thank you sir. That means a lot to me.

[Ty (Ivan) Boyer]

I have read your writings for since I started taking the creative writing class offered at school. Many of which have caught my eye. This is a beautifully written piece of your feeling for her. Keep writing my friend, you are good at it.

[Miles W.]

Thanks man. Means a lot to me.