What would I tell her.

Basically a poem I thought of the thought process that I might go through if I ever told somebody I loved them.

How would I tell her,

That I cared with all my heart

About her.

How would I tell her?

Would I say that she has great hair?

Or maybe that she knows what to wear?

Perhaps I could recite a poem

or a sonnet, or a romantic tome.

Maybe I could give her a bouquet,

of roses and other things I picked that day.

Maybe I could sing a song

like a serenade from days long gone.

Or maybe I could be me

And tell her what I really think.

I think that she is a wonderful human being

With a heart for the Lord that simply just sings.

Her smile is amazing to see.

It shows a heart with willingness to be.

A devotion to the Lord like none I've ever seen.

And such intellect, so keen.

But in the end it comes down to one thing.

I love her, because her heart makes me sing.

Author's Note

She knows the truth. She has seen the poem and given me an answer. Read "The Circle is Complete" to get an understanding of what happened.
Please review and tell me what you think.

Reviews

[Leo]

Beautiful romantic poem. I loved the last stanza and what did it for me was :
"her heart makes me sing". bblessed

[Ralph Proenza (Docralph..]

That look in your eyes and the smile on your lips when she catches you quietly staring at her speaks volumes. You’ve already told her many sweet things!

[md imran ali]

It is a really fascinating poem. But what you have missed is proper rhyming scheme. The poem should be more musical.

[Dark_Duckling]

Such a beautiful poem! It's kinda funny how we can write paragraphs declaring our love for a particular person but then when you see them face to face it's difficult to be the first person to utter the words " I love you"

[Donna]

You wrote a very beautiful poem! I would love for someone to write me a poem like that! Great job! ☺

[Avia]

I think this is beautiful. So beautiful, like what i would want someone to tell me. Well done. I love it

[DarkArtz 0703]

I understand the feeling of this poem completely.
"I love her, because her heart makes me sing."
I love it!!! very inspiring to my

[heartspeaks]

Would I say that she has great hair?
Or maybe that she knows what to wear?
Hahaha... This is so cute
And tell her what I really think.
I think that she is a wonderful human being
These lines touched me.... well done great write

[Addict With a Pen]

"I love her, because her heart makes me sing"
So very beautiful. One thing I would fix though, would be the word flow. Because It is free verse, things can always get smoother.
But great job! I'll have to read the part 2!

[Usman Muhammad]

Well done my friend, every time I read one of your writings I learn something new and unique.
You have done amazingly well in describing your emotions. It seemed to me like you were singing it.
Now I am going to read "The Circle is Complete" because I want to know her reactions after reading this beautiful poem.