silence.

We sat in silence for what felt like hours. We had those looks in out eyes like i-know-im-wrong-but-won't-admit-it. I glared at the small black hands on the clock, silently threatening them to go faster, but they didnt move. I caught myslef gazing into his eyes, they made me feel like i was in the middle of the ocean floating off into the sun. How could i be mad? Everytime i look into his eyes i feel happy again, like a girl who just got to meet a famous boy pop group in person. Yeah that kind of happy. Then i kind of slipped a smile onto my face.. and he noticed. He gave me that puzzeld look like he was confuesed about what i was feeling. he grabbed my face, looked into my eyes, looking for an answer. He could tell the fight was over. he smiled at me with my face in his hand, i felt like a little girl again. Falling in love for the first time. He stood up and offered me his hand, to help me up. We walked outside and off into the night, feeling happy as ever. With the look of shines in our eyes.

Reviews

[Jay. E. V.]

First I wanna say the second sentence could be tightened up like this:
"We exchanged stubborn glances." It is good to have a simple sentence sometimes to add power and be less wordy=).
"Every time I look into his eyes I feel happy." Could become more powerful like:
"Every time I drifted into his gaze, happiness flooded in." Or something to that effect, as it creates a more powerful image of how you're feeling=).

You'll want to use the word "look" less. It has power, but each time you use it, the power lessens. =)
However, those being my suggestions, I still loved the urgency and theme of this piece. You have talent=) and a need to write your feelings I can see. Use that=D

[Night Owl]

I love it :) Keep up the heart felt art.