dreaming sins

emotion and passion .

your fingers running down my skin 

as i begin to grin 

it felt like a dream within 

then it all started to spin 

as the dream started to thin 

it was feeling more of a deadly sin

but there you were with your immortal skin 

and it all started again 

feeling like a dream within 

more like a deadly sin 

neither of us new were to begin 

but with each others fingers running down our skin 

we felt alive , so we both started to grin

bringing our faces close like conjoined twins 

we could feel the passion running through within 

but this thing we call love is a deadly sin 

thats when it all began to spin 

thinning out like a pin 

Author's Note

dear reader ,
as your reading this i hope you like it as much as i did . review it if you did .

Reviews

[The Analog Kid]

I like the way it is erotic yet rhymes so well which gives it a lighter feel.