Spare Me the Words

Spare Me the Words

A Poem by lyss

Kindly please.
Step lightly.
Please
Spare me the words.
I know why you did what you did. 
I also know that I deserve more
Respect and Love 
Than you ever gave me. 
I'm not bitter.
So i'm a little bitter,
But after all it was a text. 
A mindless, I give up text.
A text that I woke up to. 
A text that broke my heart.
A text that I had to blindly accept
Without a chance to plead my love
Without a chance to ask for love. 
Two years...
That's what I deserve. 
After two years
 A text
While I am on the other side of the country.
At least now I have the chance to love someone better. 
A first love is just a first love and perhaps the second won't flare as bright, but will last the length of a life time. 

© 2015 lyss


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I agree.
"A first love is just a first love and perhaps the second won't flare as bright, but will last the length of a life time. "
Sometime honest and direct words are needed. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote



Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I agree.
"A first love is just a first love and perhaps the second won't flare as bright, but will last the length of a life time. "
Sometime honest and direct words are needed. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote



Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very amazing poem about breakups. Even though I have not been through one personally, I can imagine the pain and bitter feelings for the other. The lines felt really smooth, and the wording was simply terrific. I really love the last line, simply brought a more powerful 'oompf!' to the point you were trying to make.

Not always a poem lover, but I can make an exception for this one! :) Amazing job!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Enjoyed this write, the last two lines were really cool, great job.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on January 23, 2015
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Tags: text, breakup, bitter, sad, love, acceptance, first love

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Madera, CA



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