Funny

Funny

A Poem by Indra's Child

Funny,
How I found trust in you so fast..
How to stand by your side,
Would be a lifelong adventure.
How to die by your hand,
Would be a great honor...

© 2020 Indra's Child


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At begging this short note poem . Poem sound like very deep romantic deep connection forward to very close person. To longing for adventure together . That's very magical to me.

Then that ending statement. It's sound almost like Samurai oat. To accept own fate and strong loyality upon the love. I think last line should be read more like symbolism then real point. It was very nice to read . Thank you.

Posted 4 Years Ago


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I was being very literal when I wrote the last two lines. It is a deep love connection. I feel a lot.. read more
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At begging this short note poem . Poem sound like very deep romantic deep connection forward to very close person. To longing for adventure together . That's very magical to me.

Then that ending statement. It's sound almost like Samurai oat. To accept own fate and strong loyality upon the love. I think last line should be read more like symbolism then real point. It was very nice to read . Thank you.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

...

4 Years Ago

P . S .

I saw on your bio you have quote from Ian Mckay. Which is one my more favori.. read more
Indra's Child

4 Years Ago

I was being very literal when I wrote the last two lines. It is a deep love connection. I feel a lot.. read more
...

4 Years Ago

When i first hear the Fugazi . I was that time i don't speak English. But anyway i feel quiet positi.. read more

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Indra's Child

Oakland, CA



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I just want to wake up from the dream. "Hi. It's me. I know you're out there. I can feel you now. I imagine you can also feel me. You won't have to search for me anymore. I'm done running. Done hid.. more..

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