A Sociopath's Plight

I don't know why.

Careful not to disturb yourself,

You might not ever be the same-

People will walk by laughing,

As they know you're now insane..

My words will do no damage,

But mentally they might-

If you're one who's never heard,

A sociopath's plight....

My problems are exponential,

But to me, they are solutions

I see nothing as stressful,

Because obstacles are my fusion

You may not recognize it,

You may not see the signs...

But look very closely,

Come closer...

And now you're mine.

Reviews

[Resa]

You’re very beilievable.
At least your writing is.
You’re intriguing
Resa

[Karen Redburn]

Ok that was a thrill. The ending caught me off guard and I love a good scare. Few can do it well in words, you did. Cheers!

[Indra's Child]

Thank you. I don't usually do anything well in a few words... guess it was my weird mood haha

[Eddie Phillips]

I like the story within the poem and the ending is perfect. You got me with that ending. Loved it.

[Indra's Child]

Thanks for the review- I usually try not to do creepy, but I guess I felt like it haha

[Eddie Phillips]

I wrote something similar a while back. I don't usually do creepy but I get in the mood.

http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/ekphill/1147899/

[Indra's Child]

Cool, I'll check it out
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