The Valentine Riddle

The Valentine Riddle

A Poem by Czar Lyrus
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The name is self-explanitory. Can you solve it? Inspired by Edgar Allan Poe.

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Ere, deep within lies a secret riddle

 Are you the one to be my valentine?

  Ah, I hope you can see the message here

   How can this be? –A name, hidden, maybe?

    Lines can hold more than one meaning, my friend

     So, then, I advise you to look closely

      I may seem to be dawdling around-

       Is it really that easy to ask for?

        Surely all can’t think so, for it isn’t

         How else can I, but dramatically,

          Ask for your sweet voice this holiday

           Are you searching still for what is within?

            I think I may be out of hints for now

             Now is the end, is ‘t clear to you now?

© 2008 Czar Lyrus


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Wow! That was really cool! I haven't solved it yet, but I shall! Make no mistake!

Posted 15 Years Ago


Very clear and subtle enough to give it's hints yet mysterious enough so that we think about what you are writing about...GREAT WRITE!! :D

Posted 15 Years Ago


Nice. Very clever, once again. Keep writing! I loved it and I think he'll love it too.

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on November 18, 2008

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Czar Lyrus
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Hi! Here, I am simply known as Czar Lyrus Telpeliand. I write in a manner of many different subjects. I am a politcal theorist, a poet, a stroywriter, and an amateur theologian; I am very opinionated.. more..

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