The Consumation of Fear

I move forward
My mind treks back
When I see you
I have a heart attack

Lost tongue
Shaking hands
Wobbly feet
Sweating crazy
Panic jolts threw me

In that moment
I loose all control
I run on the fear I thought I let go
You terrify me from head to toe

For all that I fear
And everything I've lost
You were the problem
No love lost here
I paid the cost

Reviews

[Neon]

Ahh... am damn sure this piece comes from the heart of tears, emotions, pain and feelings. You felt the pain and were lost into the memories when you wrote this poem. All stanzas say something with the emotions to express the feelings, the lost of love throughout the poem. The title's well suited with the words you used into the poem .. Your heart cried, eyes filled with tears much when you wrote this emotional-Heart-breaking piece.

Keep on!

[felica mariiee]

All is true.. The memories linked with this poem are more painful then words of any sort will ever explain... But in the end everything will be okay.. I don't know when but it will be. THank you for yet another beautiful review

[Neon]

The pleasure's mine ..
Yeah .. everything goes settle down in the end but only when a man keeps a woman right into the arms of flower and makes her happy every-time.

[felica mariiee]

Not technically true. Sometimes a man may hold a women in his arms like a flower.. Yet she wants to float away like a seed for the man is holding her to tight and crushing her petals, her beauty and ripping the strength from within her

[Neon]

I can understand yer feelings but not every man does the same what some kinda idiots do ..
I know in today's life .. bad people want a woman only to make their nights at all .. they just thing that the mean of love is nothing but hurting woman's body and that's not every man things like that ... good folks do think good and they still know the meaning of love .. love means making love without hurting woman's body at all but combing two souls into one and makes smiles on the faces ... without pain and hurt but with peace.

[felica mariiee]

True some man think like that and others don't.. But in some cases women loose there souls over the hurt in there body before the good man comes along

[Neon]

yeah .. your right and that's what really pains the Women .. only a wrong decision of their life make their life ruined but strong women always come out from them and re-start the life in a new way ... to make their future bright with someone who keeps them like a flower and never touch them without their permissions at all.. And only the good men do the things right.

I don't think to you am good or bad as a friend but your a very nice friend to me.

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

I could feel the emotion in this piece. I enjoyed reading it.

[Sami Khalil]

We have to pay the costs and debts for so many things...A splendid poem...:).......................

[felica mariiee]

indeed we do.. and thank you

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)..............