Crytic Love

A cryptic love
Torn lives
Once was a man
Now solider till he dies
Society is his barrier
In which the true love hides
Both being selfless lovers
Told no one shall die by his side
Countless steaming night feels

Thou of hot warm while you shave
The romance less behind

Thus the smells of aftershave

A cryptic love
Torn lives
Once was a women
Now as writer she hides
Reality is her barrier
In which her feelings die
Love is entwined with the pleasure in the night
Now her mind that she will die alone
Nor shall she lives with love
For thou she feels its bitter affects
Leaves her thoughts to wonder

If true love had woven our souls together
Will we die from love
Or will we die from the lone itself inside

Reviews

[Neon]

Once again the heart of yours opened up and whipped much to re-call the name of the love. Love always give happiness and joy but it gives pain too at the same time .. sometimes love teach us a lesson of life and sometimes it makes us lost into the same lesson of life as a un-written page or a chapter of the book of the "Love-Life." This's really a very thrilled write but an emotional one as well. Your a very cool writer who knows very well how to convert .. how to transform the feelings of heart right into the depth of the words.

Keep on!

[felica mariiee]

Thank you. This isn't so much a conversion of love it is a raw sad story displayed in an arrangement of words, revealing the pain that love can bring when things block its path and cloud a lovers judgment. But yet a beautiful review by you once again.. Thank you

[StarlaFireDelta]

So wonderful that you are a writer.
excellent, real, raw, true, sorrow
life....

[felica mariiee]

Thank you I enjoy writing alot

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

That's really good. I like it.

[felica mariiee]

Thank you.. :)

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

your welcome.