Place in my heart

This is a song I wrote for a man that means a lot to me

I just want to know that your okay 
I just want to hear you say my name  
I just want you to see 
That no matter where you are 
You've taken up
A special place in my heart 
 
Oooh baby please 
 
Cinderella had a prince that save her from a witch 
Sleeping beauty was awaken from a lovers kiss 
I ain't say that my story should ever be a book 
But how I feel for you  
Has made me taken a second look 
 
I hate thought of 
Church bells, and piano music just for me 
Never wanted a man to purpose on one knee 
To me a white wedding was just a suppressed dream 
The only thing that matter 
Is that you wake up next me 
 
I just want you to know that I care about you 
I just want you to hear this song I wrote for you 
I just want you to see how much you mean to me 
That no matter where you are 
You've taken up 
A special place in my heart 
 
Darling please to me if you can hear me 
 
The angel in her white corset 
With pink roses laced in all those regrets 
Sang a song for a man 
Who gave her the will to seek a second chance 
The bells chimed in unity 
As she dance around while she sang 
 
Baby listen to me 
 
I just want know that you understand 
I just want you to hear me say please be my man  
I just want you to see that you can grasp my hand 
That no matter where you are 
You will always hold that
 Special place in my heart 

Reviews

[Neon]

Ahh ... I hate when a man puts a beautiful woman just as you into a wait ...

I loved this piece, I'd say, it's a cool song you've written for someone and I hope he knows how lucky he's to be dating you and to get marry you.

[felica mariiee]

Thank you but saddening as it was we did not work out, we wanted different things

[Neon]

For example???

[felica mariiee]

I wanted things to be simple at first due to my daughter... He wanted me to move towns, move in with him.. Basically packing up and leaving my life behind

[Neon]

So .. you meant, he's asking for make a control on your life .. i meant .. he wants you to do what he wants to ?????? is that???????

[felica mariiee]

Yes exactly thanking I couldn't think of the word. He wanted to control my life and me... I'm to stubborn and independent to do that :P

[Neon]

I hate such kinda guys make such kinda s***s with beautiful women .. I really don't like that men .. why they can't understand that Women ain't any object of them ..they can't use women as what as they want to ..

Anyway .. so, do you still live with that rude guy?

[felica mariiee]

We never did live together.. Thankful. It would have been harder if we did. I totally agree with your hatred towards men like that it disgusts me that men can be so selfish and thoughtful

[Neon]

Thank god, you ain't with that rude guy .. May god bless him and hope he'll not spoil another angel's life .. Anyway .. Sorry to ask if i hurts you so, now are you living alone or with someone???

[felica mariiee]

It doesn't hurt to ask. I live with my daughter that it is. No man in my life.

[Neon]

Thank you, Oh, am sorry to hear but don't worry .. May god fill your life with much happiness and send a man in your life who keeps you in his arms like a flower ... who'll not keep you on his underneath but would kiss you foots and would make a world your beneath ...
May god bless you.

[felica mariiee]

Why thank you so much. That just made my day :) God bless you

[zainul]

Very passionate.
I feel that the man should take the offer.