Understand

My silent vow

The pressure builds

As the night goes on

My minds fills

A secret swear

Which you cannot tell

My life is ending

As I go to hell

All secrets revealed

To you dear friend

The fact that I shan't

See you again

The problem is

I want to live

A silent battle

As I almost give

My heart bleeds

A gunshot fired

I couldn't win

So hard I tried

And as I lay

Bleeding here

I beg of you

Understand.

Reviews

[siobhan]

this peom is very easy to relate to. i love your usage of words. loved it very much