THE LYRICAL POEM *unfinished*

This is a poem that one of my friends wrote about me This is my favorite poem but i want to add some more to it please review!

The Lyrical Poem *unfinished*

 

Lyrical is an amazing friend
An awesome person
Can cheer me up always when I'm down
Has great taste in every thing
A beautiful human being to have around and i hope i never loose him as my friend
Is love able to every one
An achever in life
Has a great personality...

Lovable
Young
Respectful
Incredible
Caring
Adorable
Loyal

Promising
Ridiculously funny
Inspirational
Nice
Exciting

 

 

Author's Note

note I changed my name to Lyrical instead of my real name ( read the introduction of WHO AM I? to find out that....) I want to add to it but please review!

Reviews

[rosa]

I liked it:) I thought it was cute and funny. I'm ruinous to know who it's about though?

[Riding the Rainbow]

This is an amazing piece..it showed how great you are..be proud of it!!

[Scott Mou]

Interesting. I dont know if you did this on purpose but I liked how you didn't mention Lyrical's gender (although if it's a prince then i could guess). My favorite stanza was the second one. Keep up the interesting work!