THE GUIDELINES OF A LONER verse I: WORDS OF HOPE

this is the first part in the guidelines of a loner spoken word series I hope to write some more in the series ( my goal is to at least write three more) please review READ BOTTOM

THE GUIDELINES OF A LONER verse I: WORDS OF HOPE

You are unique

By ending your life you will not obtain the peace you seek

Think about your family

Don't cave in show them that your will is strong not weak

Show them that your a leader

Who deserves the crown

Show them that when you speak

The sound of your voice shakes the very ground

Show them that your ideas are heard

In every city and every town

Show them that your a prodigy

So why are you down

You are a savior

A blessing to every nation

The most important indiviual of this very generation

So why is your life being ruled by depression?

Why do you live a life of recession

constantly being posioned by your own self agression

letting your heart be infected by this dark corruption?

Don't give in

Don't let your self be the cause of your destruction!

Change your life around let my words lead you to a new age of reconstruction!

Only you can change your fate and live a life of succession

Live a life of integerty and break fee from the chains of depression

 

Author's Note

this is the first part in the guidelines of a loner spoken word series I hope to write some more in the series ( my goal is to at least write three more) so if you have any ideas that can inspire another spoken word ( it can be made up or a personal experience) please message me I would really appreciate it! please review!

Reviews

[MaryOwais]

I really really loved this piece, i could read it over and over again.
It would be really interesting to write something from the loner's point of view, perhaps show the world that being a loner is not always a negative thing, not all loners want to end their lives, not all loners cannot speak out loud. Some people just prefer staying away from others to read more, write more perhaps, and focus on what is really important to them and it might not be socializing..
Show the world that the world loner carries a positive connotation.

[lyricalprince]

thank you I will

[Riding the Rainbow]

This is really good and profound..
You did well!!

[Scott Mou]

I liked it. The inspiring words you used were brilliant, and rhyming was entertaining

[Aarea]

This is good, I like that you aren't just saying, commit suicide!!!!! Like a bunch of other poems on here. :) Great work, I love that it rhymed and that you were so uplifting. All loners should take a look at this.:)

[lyricalprince]

thank you I really appreciate it!

[MaryOwais]

I loved the rhyming as well :))