Mirror, Mirror (original haiku) by LyricalKing

Mirror, Mirror (original haiku) by LyricalKing

A Poem by lyricalprince
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this is the haiku my older bro written that gave me the idea for my poem Mirror,Mirror it really inspired me i hope you will feel the same way! p.s LyricalKing is the nickname I gave my brother

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Mirror,Mirror
by LyricalKing

mirror on the wall
hanging there about to fall 
your my only friend

© 2013 lyricalprince


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lyricalprince
thanks bro for the idea! PLZ REVIEW!

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I've always been fond of Haiku. Thought it deviates from the original Haiku format, this poem is beautiful in its simplicity and its meaning. I would just change "your" in the last line to "you're" for grammar. But other than that, I really like it.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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I've always been fond of Haiku. Thought it deviates from the original Haiku format, this poem is beautiful in its simplicity and its meaning. I would just change "your" in the last line to "you're" for grammar. But other than that, I really like it.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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 Added on July 13, 2013
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