There she is.

There she is.

A Poem by Lyricalfairydust
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"Shadow" Tanka 5/7/5/7/7 Challenge.

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There right by my side
Following every move
Watching me closely
Silently hovering near
A grey dark glimpse of myself

© 2023 Lyricalfairydust


Author's Note

Lyricalfairydust
A challenge amongst friends on writing a 5/7/5/7/7 Tonka with the word Shadow without actually using the word.

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Ooh! I'm gonna have to look into tanka. Short, sweet and to the point, if not mentioning the point is the point.
This could be right up my cul de sac, as I do like sucksink....suksyn...brevity in poems!
Nicely captured.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lyricalfairydust

1 Month Ago

Thank you for the review. You must try it. Tankas are fun. I was introduce to it when my friend brou.. read more
Lorry

1 Month Ago

Great. I'll let you know, thanks.
Lyricalfairydust

1 Month Ago

You're very welcome Lorry and thank you.
Cleverly and beautifully created, my friend.. would-could learn this and remember. Many thanks for sharing.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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emmajoygreen

1 Month Ago

Every word sent was/is sincere! Wishing you and your family happy and peaceful days over the
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Lyricalfairydust

1 Month Ago

Wishing you and your family a blessed and joyous time over these special days. May your hearts be wa.. read more

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Added on October 10, 2023
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