A very humble person.

A very humble person.

A Poem by Lyricalfairydust
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"Humble" Tanka 5/7/5/7/7 Challenge.

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Have some gratitude.
Take a second lend an ear.
Stop and ground yourself.
Try and be open minded.
Love yourself and thy neighbor. 

© 2023 Lyricalfairydust


Author's Note

Lyricalfairydust
A challenge amongst friends on writing a 5/7/5/7/7 Tonka with the word Humble, without actually using the word.

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Being gullible and naive is not a good thing but it does look humble where people took everything of ours. I am in agreement with Its not a good thing. Being smart and honesty is the Best humble thing. Being nicer is like Cinderella where her king never returns thinking that she is going to make his life better though she is poor but with her attitude, theses days melt like every other day and night where king promises but never wants to keep it. It’s a disloyal attitude of a failure of a king, though he hails whole universe, it’s one more failure second time added to my past.
What I would do with losers in my past they are but I am not. I am going to be there with my mother goddess sooner than others.



Posted 1 Year Ago


You make being “humble” sound like a good thing.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lyricalfairydust

1 Year Ago

Being humble is a great thing.

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