" Work, work, work, work, work, work "

"Work" Tanka 5/7/5/7/7 Challenge.

Ding, makes you aware.

Great them hello, take their fare.

All day moving fast.

Tik Tok Tik Tok, goes the clock.

Round and Round, till Five O' Clock.

Author's Note

A challenge amongst friends on writing a 5/7/5/7/7 Tonka with the word Work, without actually using the word.

Reviews

[Arundass TP]

Enjoyed reading your poem. A musical stuff. Good work 👍

[Itsdandammit]

I love it, great work description and very upbeat as well, nice work

[Ash Ley]

Love this 🥰 so fun 😍 I can see us singing this throughout the day 😍

[emmajoygreen]

Cleverly created, musical and more!. You could be the queen of the Tonka - do them so well.