The one that loved her the most.

The one that loved her the most.

A Poem by Lyricalfairydust
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Pickle Paragraph challenge.

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"Perfection, you are but pure perfection", he say's, as he slowly picks her up. 
"I could never put in words how much I love you."
Craving her taste, he picks her up and lays her down. 
Kindly and with an ever so soft touch, he places his hand on her. 
Little did she know that his love for her, was that of an addiction. 
Every second of everyday, he longed for the next time he could have her. 
He squeezes her tightly between his hand, making sure his grasp was firm. 
Then as he stared at her deeply, he sticks a knife through her center. 
Slowly a puddle forms around her. 
Her entire life, drowning , locked away by the very ones who created her. 
Now here she lay lifelessly, in a pool of her own fluids, because of the one that loved her the most. 
He cuts her again and again, slicing her entirely, till her body form was no more. 
"Now for the finishing touch", he says , as he walks across the room with a bit of her remains in his hand. 
He reaches over the table and gently places the pieces atop his beautifully dressed burger.
He replaces the bun and takes a large yet gentle bite. 
"Mmmm, nothing like some dill to complete my day."

© 2023 Lyricalfairydust


Author's Note

Lyricalfairydust
A challenge amongst friends on writing a piece with the word pickle, without actually using the word.

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A fantastic blend of love, adoration and violent murder with a twist at the end..very cool.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lyricalfairydust

1 Year Ago

Thank you for your review. That was exactly what I intended it to be.
I love the look down 🥰 wonderful writing, thank you for sharing

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lyricalfairydust

1 Year Ago

Thank you for your review. Greatly appreciated.
And here all this time I thought Jack the Ripper was dead.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lyricalfairydust

1 Year Ago

Thank you for the review . A little love and horror with a splash of humor is what I was going for h.. read more

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Added on September 1, 2023
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