a mid-winter dream

How much i would love right now to put put my hands around your waist.
look into your eyes and admire your face.
kiss your forehead and keep my hold.
to never let you go again, even when we're old.
I would tell you I love you and remain so strong.
because i know that you needed me too all along.
i'd lay you down on the bed, watch you fall asleep
i'd make sure not to wake you up while i quietly weep.
i missed you so much, my love is a flame
my heart would skip a beat if i heard your name
i'd forget to breathe, and my vision would blur.
because i can't handle the pain that losing you has incurred.
every day i mentally count, day 3, day 4.
waiting until i can countdown to the day i walk through your heart's door.
until then, i count up from the day we stopped to speak.
because its only day 7 and already i feel week.
when i see you again,  it will be a happy time.
but until then, i ask of you to please wait so as to join your heart with  mine.

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[LisetteCanWrite!]

Great flowing of emotions.. with strong rhyme sequence! This held the essence of a very private written piece.. with everything you feel interwoven with the feel of waiting for that very special other to enter back into your life. This had a feeling of new love.. asking someone to wait and be patient as you dread losing them in your life.. and loss can be hard. Love is a really needed experience.. sometimes we end up with someone so much different than we could have ever imagined.. for it is found in a beauty that goes farther than the skin.. loved your energy in this.. I hope you things work out.. either way it can be a positive experience if you take what you receive from another the right way! Great job!