only she would know

boy meets girl, the story is the same, but something here is different.
We opened our mouths to say hello and the attraction was mutually instant.
this allegory or funny story, not funny haha but funny peculiar.
is just as confuzzling as the chicken and the egg because i still can't figure out how I've come to lose her.
I would have thought that i could avoid situations like these.
Now im thinkin that this girl and i share the same heart like we're Siamese.
when she's around its like chicken soup for the soul,
but without her, nothing holds and pours through the hole
in my mind where her absence leaves a scar.
and like Tiger, without her, i can't seem to make it to par.
three weeks without contact gives me the numbing feeling of a starving for love.
but when i talk to her again, i feel the need to thank the one above.
Then we realize once again that for us its all or none.
and then make the distance between us farther than pluto and the sun.
objectively speaking, neither of us are fully ready to commit.
but emotionally speaking, neither of us are fully ready to forfeit.
So here i write, stuck with indecision.
to proceed with communication without parental consent, or drown in self derision.
but somehow i feel that this hasty situation averted will help us further to go.
but when it comes to how she'll feel when that time comes, only she would know.

 

Reviews

[Kenya J]

Oh my. This is beautiful.
My favorite part is: "So here i write, stuck with indecision.
to proceed with communication without parental consent, or drown in self derision.
but somehow i feel that this hasty situation averted will help us further to go.
but when it comes to how she'll feel when that time comes, only she would know."

Just genius. Good Job

[Aaron Hamburger]

great, i love it, nice job, bravo, congrats, kudos.

[LisetteCanWrite!]

This is so full of yearning and the lusting passion of that first impression building to be more.. hoping but not yet ready for long term.. yet allowing a door open if the other should become more interested. They must be compelling.. to write the emotions of not wanting to commit.. yet allowing the ball to fall in her court. I felt a sincere feeling that you would like to explore the opportunity with this person.. hopefully it comes true for you.. and it's everything you hoped and dreamed. I loved the rhythm and flow to this.. the message brings one of hope for the future.. in love! Great job!!!