It is true

It is true

A Poem by Undeniable Truth
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para mi Querida

"

it is true

I  love you.

Three words that if said to a rolling stone are said in vain.

Three words that if sincerely spoken can end in pain.

three words that describe the sacrifice one is willing to make.

three words that show what desperate measures one is willing to take.

three words that completely exposes the speaker's core.

three words that allows the one most cared about to walk out the door.

three words that causes me to write this poem.

three words that makes me yearn to make your heart my home.

three words that i spoke to you some months ago

three words you replied back with to let me know.

three words that causes me to not want to hold you back.

three words that makes me wish our previous relationship was still a fact.

it is true.

I love you.

i always will.

remember you still.....

© 2009 Undeniable Truth


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While reading this, I felt the pain and the sincere love in your heart. Well written.

Posted 14 Years Ago


WOW! I feel the pain in this! It is an undeniable truth that love can lift you high, or slam you to ground hard. Sometimes I wish there was an on-off switch, to turn off the pain! Great write!!!

Posted 14 Years Ago


Love this poem. I wrote a poem title "8 letter 3 words 1 Meaning". 831 stands for I love you. This piece is wonderful and very close to me because it is filled with a story but yet it is a simplistic powerful poem. You did a wonderful job. I'm impressed and I love the ending.

Posted 15 Years Ago


Wow.. this was very full of emotions.. those three words can be sooo intense when both spoken and reciprocated. You could be the richest person on this planet but if you did not know the feeling of love.. I would think that person the poorest and most neglected. Love is so underrated... so divine and the highest aspiration in a lifetime! To find that one true love is like finding a needle in a haystack so to speak! I loved the way you described your feelings so openly.. there is sadness and joy in the ending.. to think that someone would still love someone that much "after" splitting up.. that is unique.. as many spout hateful resentment after. I found true passion here.. and I hope you get your butterfly back one day!

Posted 15 Years Ago


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Love this poem! Everything about it. I really like how you kept saying "three words." I also like how you show all the different sides of love...not just the mushy, gushy side lol. The ending is sad...how you say you wish the relationship was still a fact. But all in all...this was a great poem that was written VERY well! :)

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on November 16, 2009

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I am simply trying to understand myself and grow from my poetry. If I happen to catch your eye, then by all means stop by, but to be honest, this is all therapeutic, to learn to love again before I di.. more..

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