My mind's eye wanders into the future

simply me... no rhyme scheme, no flow, simply thoughts of my love and how she has changed my life.

As i take a long blink and study the back of my eyelid,
i realize how much you have affected my life.
I dream episodes of our future life together
reach out for hugs that have not yet been asked for
and utter words of reassurance that are not yet needed.
 

I desperately try to be the best for you.
considerate of your feelings.
respectful of your beliefs.
supportive of your passions.
provider of your relief.
protector of your heart.
lover of your mind.
connoisseur of your body.
 

All I want to do is be the embodiment of your hapiness.
anything less, not good enough,
anything more, not needed.
I dream of seeing you beam at me walking down the aisle
getting the feeling that we're the only ones in the room.
my heart wanting to come out my chest and meet you halfway.
Honestly, I am willing to meet you all the way if necessary.
financially, emotionally, morally, spiritually.
 

all I know is that I know what I want and it is YOU.
I know what I need and it is your love, care and support.
I know what feels right, and that is you in the middle of my embrace.
So I will continue this dream and work toward the reality until i have been kissed by a rose on the grave.

Reviews

[Fran Marie]

know what feels right, and that is you in the middle of my embrace.
So I will continue this dream and work toward the reality until i have been kissed by a rose on the grave.

How deeply poetic~ I simply love this lovely piece of writing ~ especially the last few ending lines
which ties the sincerity of feelings within up rather nicely~

[Jade_Phenomenal]

Wow!!!

"I desperately try to be the best for you.
considerate of your feelings.
respectful of your beliefs.
supportive of your passions.
provider of your relief.
protector of your heart.
lover of your mind.
connoisseur of your body."


"I dream of seeing you beam at me walking down the aisle
getting the feeling that we're the only ones in the room.
my heart wanting to come out my chest and meet you halfway.
Honestly, I am willing to meet you all the way if necessary.
financially, emotionally, morally, spiritually."


This poem is UNDENIABLY the most romantic thing that I've ever read in my life!! This piece really touched my heart in a profound way.......This is exactly what every woman dream of in her "future husband".

OUTSTANDING WRITE, I loved every single line!!!