building patience

building patience

A Poem by Undeniable Truth

she cries out for me
forbidden love restricts my
future wife from me.

© 2009 Undeniable Truth


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You're amazing this is so sweet and so true. I love that you don't doubt it for a second, that you knew from the beginning that marriage was imminent. Patience is the hardest thing to have, especially when something so beautiful is waiting on the other end, just barely in reach. Love the way it was written. Keep writing.

-Marleina

Posted 15 Years Ago


Awe, i really love this. It's so sweet, and expressed wonderfully in a haiku.
Good Job.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Undeniable Truth
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I am simply trying to understand myself and grow from my poetry. If I happen to catch your eye, then by all means stop by, but to be honest, this is all therapeutic, to learn to love again before I di.. more..

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