hopeless

a father's contempt
I can never do it right
tonight I will die

Reviews

[Aquamarine Angel]

Wow....well I like your haiku. It's nice, not nice but...I like it. I has a goth, emo feel too it. Which I hope you don't take the wrong way, because in my eyes it's a good thing. I like your poem, it's good. It has so much meaning into it even though there are not that many words. I like your writing...you're a pretty cool person. And thanks for reviewing the other day.

-Aquamarine Angel

[Legion]

Deep and disturbing. Hope it isn't true though. Well done haiku.

[Marilyn My Bitterness]

Hey uh, I don't know what the depressed faux vampire is talking about, but I love haiku's and I love this poem. Haiku's are meant to be simple, straightforward, and concise and that is exactly what this is. Most things can be expressed in few words and that is the beauty of creating poetry with such restrictions. I know what it is like to keep trying to please a parent, yet feel like you are getting nowhere. So yeah, don't listen to that other review. Keep writing, and i'll keep reading.

-Marleina