Until Forever

Another expression of feelings from the perspective of a male that is secure with expressing his emotions.

Until the moon stops shining. Until the sun burns out.

even after then, you will still have my undying love.

maybe it's the feel of your soft touches. maybe it's the brightness of your smile that has me hooked onto you.

maybe its your milk chocolate, caramel like complexion that

makes me wanto to touch you

makes me want to hold you

makes me want to kiss you

makes me want to caress you

makes me want to look into your eyes and straight to your soul

So that I can fulfill every desire that it has.

I will never lead you astray, not tomorrow nor today

nor any moment in time that I still have

a single breath left in my body or soul, or even a beat left in my heart.

I feel connected to you like our souls are intertwined,

and we have similiar minds, because you have me feeling like i got the jones in my bones.

i'll be whatever you need: a father, a mother, a sister, a brother or even a good friend

that believes in you forever as evergreen.

You know that I care for you and you know that i'll be there for you.

and i'll try my best even though I couldn't possibly rise to the throne that I have lifted you to as my queen.

But i'll still do the best that I can

to try to live up to being your man.

and i'm saying all of this to help you to understand.

I'm saying this hoping that it will go through that hard outer shell.

and into your complex mind, and into your loving heart

that i've been striving all this time to be a part of.

And i hope you will follow your heart in the way that it leads you.

and i hope it will show you

the way that I feel about you

the way that I care about you.

the way that I LOVE you.

I'm just trying to help you to see

that I want it to be

you and me

so that I can and will comfort you.

I will treasure you

I will cherish you

and i will love you

I will love you today, tomorrow, last year, next week.

but most importantly, I will love you right now,

 

Until Forever.

Reviews

[Masq]

Beautiful and very well expressed piece. I enjoyed reading it. I'm looking forward to reading more of your work.

[LisetteCanWrite!]

Very passionate and heartfelt writing straight from the heart.. I could feel the energy coming from the words as I read it through.. I then read it a second time.. very nice coming from a male perspective.. liked it very much!!! =)

[Marilyn My Bitterness]

Awe so sweet and heartfelt. I actually really like that you didn't focus too much on the looks but more so on the emotions that you felt when with her. That to me is really important because it is one thing to point out her beauty of course that is on the surface, but the emotions and feelings of being with someone is only you would know so I appreciate you emphasizing that so much more. Only one thing, line 11 "So that I fulfill every desire ti has." I think you meant it. Just pointing it out =D

-Marleina