Drowning

                             Can't breath,

                             Why can't I breath

                             Does any one know?

                             I have to breath if I'm to live

                             What's the world come to  

                             Is no one gonna save me?

                             Please, I can't breath!

                             Coughing, gasping,

                             I don't want to die yet!

                             I can't even cry from pain.

                             Someone please save my life!

                             What did I do to get this?

                             This isn't fair to me.

                             Darkness creeps.

                             It's coming closer to me.

                             Is this really my fate, to die?

                             No sence in trying to fight.

                             I couldn't win if I tried.

                             No regrets here?

                             What's that sound?

                             It's getting stronger...

                             *Gasps and wakes up*

                             Only a dream.

                             Time for school.

Reviews

[MIDNIGHT ROSE]

Very good! There are times I have these same kind of dreams where I feel Like I am drowning or suffocating not being able to breathe. Sometimes, the pain and suffering in our lives, the frustrations manifest themselves through dreams. Believe me I know been there done that...

[The Lady Anasteja]

Time for school. Love the ending.

[Gandré]

we all go through those phases of wild dreams.
I liked your putting itnto scene...so real, and
I liked the twist on the end: actually, this was
very pleasant. Thanks for your lovely comment
after reading my new poem The Test. Much appre-
ciated.
bye,
lara gandr�