Sun or Moon?

Sun or Moon?

The sun or the moon? The sun brings comfort when people see the yellow light shining through the windows after a long, needed, rest the moon has given them. The moon brings sleep and leaves people free with their imagination as they drift off to sleep and dream. The sun fills you with light that gives you the might to do the task that will make you last. As soon as you see sunlight streaming in, it sets off an alarm in your mind to get ready to do your job. The moon is mysterious, it awakens other species as soon as you turn your night light off. The night is dark and chilly, but nice in a good sort of way. The morning and afternoon is light and warm, filled with comfort. If you stare at the sun, you'll become blind, so all you can really see is a small yellow spot. If you stare at the moon, you will see a beautiful, big silver sphere. The moon leaves you dazzled, and the sun leaves you with yellow spots in your eyes.  and the sun leaves you. There are so many different things that the sun and moon bring, so you can choose.

Author's Note

I like the moon better than the sun. Why don't you tell me in the comments which one YOU like better?! You can, if you want to, also rate this honestly please.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I like both. My favorite part of life is watching the sun fall and rise. Enjoy the journey of the moon in between. A entertaining poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[lydie]

Thank you!

[Cool Girl]

This is very good! You are a great writer for someone so young!

[lydie]

Thank you very much!

[Cool Girl]

You are very welcome

[Writingislife5]

i like the sun better. good writing

[lydie]

Thank you!