Love's Defeat

Love's Defeat

A Poem by Brittney Solomon
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this is about a woman who is recovering from a bad heart break and she is explaing her emotions

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Hidden within her heart
Lies an unforsaken song
Deep within the melody
A story has begun

 

Wrapped within her heartstrings
The rhythm plays its beat
On the empty soul
That show loves one true defeat

© 2011 Brittney Solomon


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I love this there very little words yet there is so much impact of emotion thrust at me! well done !

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love the last line

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Added on April 20, 2011
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Brittney Solomon
Brittney Solomon

fontana, CA



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Hey, Im just me i not claing to be the best poet actually i know that i am far from but i am hoping to grow becasue this is truly one of my passions more..

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