silent note

silent note

A Poem by luvvinblue

my notes tremble away
in a distant longing for a new life to emerge
where all the rhymes came to rest
and the music stops to breath
the silence came to life
as I catch my lagging sound
I see no echoes, no vibrations 
that follow through my path
It was mellow, quite entrancing
quite tragic yet painfully comforting

© 2024 luvvinblue


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What was your inspiration for this, thank you for sharing it, I rather enjoyed reading it.

Posted 1 Month Ago


luvvinblue

1 Month Ago

thank you for reading it!
I just felt too tired lately and I thought maybe doing nothing for .. read more
Dave W.

1 Month Ago

Taking time off sounds like a great thing to do, have a good day.

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Added on October 30, 2024
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luvvinblue
luvvinblue

Caloocan, NCR, Philippines



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