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A Poem by luvvinblue

if the flowers could speak
would it dare?
to question that it's beauty crossed the lair
would it glance, would it stare
would it laid it's back bare?
would it question the maiden's snare
and sharpen its fang's smutted air
if the flower's could speak
would it say?
that her beauty is nothing rare
when the butterflies showered it's bloom
would it questioned her lettered room?
When the winds made her dance
would it bends on its light trance?
When her scent flush like a wine
would it bleed it's wicked vine?
if the flower's could speak
would it ask
what's the contest all about?
would it crumple, would it fall?
when her smile shattered the glass
Of it's empty longing soul?
When the fabric of her dress
Flowed swiftly on its rest
Would it cursed the sinful wind
As she was more of its best?
If the flower's could speak
Inside it's bewitching room
outside where the sun's light
Covered in its pickled gloom
Adores by the wind, dress and butterfly
By it's stares on the maiden's eyes
Knowing it was nothing to lie
Grunting, panting with silence sigh.

© 2024 luvvinblue


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I really liked this, I think the only thing I would change is make the flower singular, other than that, it was thought provoking. Thank you for sharing.

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luvvinblue
luvvinblue

Caloocan, NCR, Philippines



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I'm a first year college student taking ABLCS course. It is my first time to try writing in online platforms so spare with me ^^ I'm very open to feedbacks!! more..

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