The Common Man

The Common Man

A Poem by luvvinblue
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When life gives you little too short to cope with your so called fate

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He asked why he was born in cruel
Fitted and burn with fuel
The child whose friend is the sun
Turned to be a common man
Was caught captive in his own dream
Drag along to people he can't lean
Shackles bind, can't run
A life of a common man
He looked forward each day
To see the sun looking away
Like an empty dried plotted river
Begging the sun to be nicer
Haven't you had enough he say
if not, just take this life away
For no one's brave enough to stay
To give this common man a ray
Can't the sun be nicer?
Can't the wind be soft?
why does anyone want to fight it
when I don't have anything to cope?

© 2024 luvvinblue


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luvvinblue
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Beautifully written poem. Enjoyed reading

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luvvinblue
luvvinblue

Caloocan, NCR, Philippines



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