Don't you?�.

Don't you?

 

 Don't you see the tears forming in my eyes,

as you explain to me what you've done?

I can't believe this...

Don't you see the lie in my face 

as I tell you that I can't deal with this anymore?

I'd deal with anything for you...

Don't you see the pain in my body,

as you tell me you've found another love?

I always knew I wasn't good enough...

Don't you hear the suffering in my words,

as I say that you were everything to me...

it's true, you were...

Don't you see the fear in my steps,

as I turn and walk away?

You were my world...and now I have nothing...

Reviews

[Emmy McKenney]

I love this Tiffany! I can kinda relate to this in a weird sorta way! I know what it feels like!

[eileen.]

i really liked this especially since i can relate to it!
i'd love to see more of them :)

beautiful tiff!!!!!!

love ya....

:p

[Katie]

Such a sad poem. I love it though- its so raw and pure emotions. Keep Writting!

[mystic soul]

nice job.... your poem is really very good... very well written!!!!

[Lucia]

awww...sooo sad. But honest and well written. Great flow. This poem really makes me contemplate the importance of trust. And how our actions really affect others. Great work! =]

[Emily?]

Tiff, this is so beautiful!Not even kidding, I love the way you take the poem right from your heart! This poem is so amazing it makes me feel so sad, but yet so happy for you that you have the ability to write like a professional! Your amazing......!