What Are You

What Are You

A Poem by luvs2write

Elongated paths with no end
To be seen,
Evening and morning
Remain the same.
Neverending nothingness,
Insanity sets in.
Time is irrelevant;
Yearning, a sin.


Oh holy heart,
Beat for the last time.
Long was the life though
I had longer in mind.
Vainly I grasped;
I wanted control
Of a life full of dreams.
Now hidden in a land

Where present meets past.
Hours and minutes
Are no longer the same;
Time is a misconception.

Away from this thought!
Resist the temptation,
Ever so quick to doubt but

Your answer leaves the core
Of my soul
Unsatisfied.

© 2018 luvs2write


Author's Note

luvs2write
Just some ramblings about something that's been bugging me...thought I'd attempt an acrostic XP

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i feel a deep longing ... a difficult search .. perhaps a dip into madness ... i don't see the acrostic in this??? .. i like the play on time .. it is man made and relative for sure ... i see a sojourner who even when finding an answer ... is not able to be satisfied ... ain't it just like us humans to be so ;}
E.

Posted 5 Years Ago


I really enjoy your writing, I read bouquet too and I don't know what it is about them but I just find them so refreshing and satisfying to read.

Posted 5 Years Ago


luvs2write

5 Years Ago

Thank you :)

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Just a girl trying to survive adulthood. I am a lover of cats, coffee, and all things science. My writing can be a bit random at times. Betta fish and axilotls are underrated. more..

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