when it cries..

well yeh..

when it cries,

no tears flow

but it sure hurts.

 

when it cries

nobody sees

nobody knows

 

when it cries

it hurts,

such pain only known to the owner

 

it is the HEART <3

Reviews

[Lydia Shutter]

Even when tears do not flow, the pain is real and is felt. Perhaps it is felt by more than just you....you might not realize the depth of emotion flowing around you. Beautifully said. Lydi**

[luviva]

thank you for dropping by..
always appreciate the reviews.

[AYVID N]

Such a quiet and gentle expression of pain. Those sincere of feeling are often subdued in expressing their hurt and disillusionment. You are once such poet of noble thoughts and words. Thanks for this great poetry. I learnt something from it.

[Frieda P]

Ahhh, good point my friend, blood tears perhaps...probably the most affecting kind.

[luviva]

ohh thanxx Frieda for dropping by....
always love your reviews

[Frieda P]

Was my pleasure luviva, haven't seen you around lately, where you been hiding out? ;-)

[luviva]

when life catches up with you my friend...
anyway been round tied up with uni stuff and allread morewhen life catches up with you my friend...
anyway been round tied up with uni stuff and all
dont get no time to think or breath.

[Frieda P]

Always good to be tie'd up in learning....so long as it wasn't anything earth shattering.

[luviva]

LOL no... definately not building the next big bang cause.
anyway how you doing??

[Frieda P]

Haha good to know, oh...depends on if I have my crankypants on or not. ;-)

[luviva]

uhmm so them crankypants???
any more details or am i snooping???

[Frieda P]

Life, those curve balls ya know? My kid is driving me bonkers.....you guys ;-)

[luviva]

lol... i understand having kids is a real rollercoaster..
but also sweet heyy

[Frieda P]

Yep, best and worst of.................