the traveller's plea.

well uhmmm we all love travelling don't we??

Starts with a prayer

Stating her need to reach the

Station on time.

 

After this,

A need to actually get on, then it

Advances into

Another chain of prayers.

 

Please God help me find a

Place, near someone a place so...

Peaceful, so that my journey

Presents a great adventure, complete with

Pleasant memories.

 

New to the eyes

Not known to the eyes

Never seen the bad days

Nor the artificial man made facades

Natural from within the heart of

Nature, at it's fullness.

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

okay, love you guys...
and please read, review and give sincere reviews.

Reviews

[Kyle Sky]

Beautiful piece.it truly presented the desire of a traveller for an adventure story with a happy ending, close the relaxation of the greens and far from the stressor humanity. It was short but not choppy. Also, it presented a whole hearted desire for simply a happy adventure of life, something I can partly sympathize with. All in all, good piece.

[luviva]

thanxx sky..

[SHEEMA HUQ]

Thanks for sharing for spiritual commitments here Luviva, excellent writing :)

[khalid]

very nice prayers. i loved how you have penned it.

[luviva]

thanxxx for the review

[Siren]

we all love travels, and we want them safe but adventurous. there's a certain delight, a certain excitement to it. i enjoyed it :)

[luviva]

thank you XX

[Siren]

always welcome (:

[Balkaran Sidhu]

very well written..language used looked pretty

[luviva]

thank you,,.. appreciate :)

[Onyia-Ali, Kingsley Chu..]

The fact is that you wrote in a simple easily understood sentence. I really appreciate the last three lines of the third stanza. Good. Well done.

[luviva]

thank you..;p

[StayAnchored]

I think you did a good job. You made me wish I was in Ireland or somewhere beautiful! :)

[luviva]

ohh thats great/... thanxx for the review