down this road i walk

down this road i walk

A Poem by luviva
"

just life basically

"

down this road i walk

down this beaten path i walk

down this cold, narrow winding, thornny road i walk.

 

as i ponder whether its worth

to loose my self as i passby the crossroads

leaving a piece of me at every crossroad.

 

so i ask,

how many crossroads will i have to pass

before i finally reach my destination.

 

and how much of me will i have left?

so i ask?

why loose my self in this world's treasures.

 

when i know the Kingdom of the LORD awaits me?

why celebrate and float in these riches,

when i know they never last forever.

 

these are all the tripping stones.

those riches you accumulate for yourself.

the selfless will stand to gain, when they what share they have.

 

so all i ask is share it,

for you will leave it behind and it is the tripping stone

in your journey to the promised land.

 

© 2013 luviva


Author's Note

luviva
love you all..........

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i love the faith behind this piece


great job!

Posted 11 Years Ago


luviva

11 Years Ago

thannxx XX
this is a nice almost Dylanesque poem, put together well, good job

Posted 11 Years Ago


luviva

11 Years Ago

thanxx leslie
appreciate it :)
Beautiful, is the only word I can describe this as... Great job as always! :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


luviva

11 Years Ago

thanxx J appreciate your visits :o)
StayAnchored

11 Years Ago

You're very welcome! :)

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luviva
luviva

KENT, Gillingham , United Kingdom



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