WE SO NEED A SAVIOUR

it is what it is....

we sure do need a saviour

for the severe current condition of our

world, saving it will

for sure take a mighty hand.

 

it is not about the corruption,

neither is it about the inequalities

we tried peace, unity , equity and tranquillity

but we both know it was a terrible failure

with war still raging on up till now.

 

its all about the reforms,

redefinitions and rearrangements.

with the national boundaries re drawn,

the social welfare restructured,

the marriage too, is redefined!

 

why now, of all times

what will our kids grow up to?

what will they tell the future generations?

will they say it was our greats that did so?

 

why not stand up and protect what we believe in?

marriage redefinitions defies all

beliefs , culture and social norms.

I hear marriage is now supposed

to be between two people who love each other.

how about a tripplesome??

 

why lie?

when we both know it is between a man and woman?

why did God create Eve as Adam's companion and not Chris?

think am lying, try the bible Genesis 1:27-29.

God created male and female and blessed them to have children.

 

so tell me,

how will a man and man have a kid?

you are going to say adoption?

well, am not against the gay people

because they are also human, but

legalising same sex marriage is wrong.

 

the next time you know,

they will be legalising marriage between

humans and their pet animals.

because they also love each other right?

 

 

 

Author's Note

your thoughts are welcome...
and please know that if I offended any one in the due course plz
forgive me.

Reviews

[Muse]

the ending was clever....a great punching line to bring this into perspective. The problem is the lines are becoming grey...clear definitions of what was once right and what is wrong is becoming less obvious...so I understand your argument. But as a fellow Christian one that has me perplexed is being married to more than once person. It seemed to me that this was a normal and a regular practice in the old testament....so why is it so taboo today?

[luviva]

yeh, you are right in the bible there was polygamy and all but it was man and many women not many men.
thanxx for the review though and some great thoughts... this is going to make me open my bible .

[Muse]

a lot of oxy-morons...it's no wonder that both believes and non-believers are terribly confused.

[luviva]

that's why the world is sinking now!! every single person has their own way of twisting the Bible meanings and all but we still have to stand up for what we believe in!!

[Paul Seaman]

I have a slightly different take on this. I do think living the gay lifestyle is a mistake. But I also believe that it is a civil right for one "person" to marry whomever it pleases them. Not an animal, not an inanimate object, but another person. I may try to explain to them why I think their choice is a mistake, but I will honour their right to make that choice.... that's my take. But I support your desire to fight gay marriage any way you can within the rules of decency... :-)

[luviva]

yeh well the animal thing was just to nail the point Home!! I mean i hear people are now buying holidays for their pet animals and the next time you know they will be marrying them...

[Paul Seaman]

as long as you can get them to sign the pre-nup !!! ;-)

[luviva]

educate me.. I mean what is a pre-nup? lOl guess i dnt souund stupid

[Paul Seaman]

Per-Nuptial Marriage agreement !

[luviva]

ohh yeah, am all aboard now...:)

[BL]

I agree with some of this, but there is so much here to comment on. I am not surprised that humankind continually rewrites the rule book including the bible at its own convenience.

[luviva]

am so glad you reviewed,
because its through sharing thoughts tht we learn

[BL]

I enjoyed your poem

[khalid]

according to my belief as well as my own opinion, im completely with your message here. human beings have created things which even animals would feel strange they would have....blood has become a part of our daily life, it would be strange if an hour passes without hundreds are killed somewhere in our crazy world. concerning gays' marriage, it is something even animals feel ashamed of. have you ever heard about an animal marrying another animal from the same sex? we are getting away from our nature so our nature is getting away from us..
i loved the message as well as the way you have posted it..

[luviva]

so true Khalid and it is just a shame..........
we got little control over it as the common lay men but all we can do it talk.....

[Siren]

it was a good write. some things have to be kept as they were meant to be. enjoyed reading this.

[luviva]

thank you so much for droping by ad reviewing :)

[Siren]

no problem (:

[Blue Ivory]

Powerful feelings. You have expressed worries about the state of the world well.

[luviva]

thanxx siren...
:)

[Brandon S. Whitten]

Interesting point of view. Good read and write.

[luviva]

thanxx for stopping by ;p

[StayAnchored]

The ending made me laugh but the scary thing is that it is possible in the future...:/
I am totally with you on this and you did a great job expressing your feelings :)

[luviva]

thanxx lilie...
you know the state of the world we r living in is just crazyy
anything is possible but all we got to do is talk about it maybe one time one day our oices will b heard

[StayAnchored]

You're welcome! And I agree :)