MISS PLAN - LESS.

uhmm well its about life choices right??

           miss planless

         always sets out

        to plan her days.

 

but

her plans are always les

she ends up being

plane - less

 

      which makes sence

   since she had no clues

of what she was planning

  making her clue - less         

 

       she had no

                                     plans or clues of what

     was going on

                                 so she was short of ideas.

                                      making her idea - less                      because of her being

                 planless, clueless, and

                         idea-less                          

                   her life is ultimately

                           limited!        

    which is surprising i mean  since

         she has all things

              in lesses,

  it should have been limitless.

 

 

Author's Note

i dont knw whether this is a poem or story or whatever
but your thoughts can help define it..
thannxxx

Reviews

[SHEEMA HUQ]

An interesting little story, about how someone who either felt she did have the capacity to make decisions or did indeed have the capacity to make decisions and who indeed would rather that her decisions were shared with others or open to wider interpretation...... of what it means when your ability to make decisions which are for the fulfilling, are taken away from you, possibly about yearning for one's own independence and safe, trusting, friendships. I this piece of writing makes no sense to you, I am sorry, although I would like to say, thanks for this meaningful piece.....when one is right in mind, 'gormlessness' really ought to be temporary, don't you think? Best.

[beautiful dreamer]

this is a story poem lol. definitely. love the layout. its a s confusing as the content. love the irony at the end. overall great write.

[Siren]

this is great. I really like it. I thought I had misread, but when I got to the end, it made sense. Plans are tricky things--you can have too many or too little. I'm not sure exactly where the balancing point is, but this write suggests that there is one, and that it can be reached. well done!

[luviva]

.... if you have the right state of mind and know what you want.........
thanxx for the review

[Siren]

welcome! you've got some great stuff, and i love reading!

[khalid]

it is very smart and cute..i only wish you would revise some punctuations such as Miss, plan-less not plane-less...
i loved the structure as well as the words picking and the images. very nice poem really..welcome back..

[luviva]

thanxx Khalid n I am really back........