get the coc can out!!

yeh, well this is a one off, for my friend who passed away just a few days back.

get them out my dearest,

share them together,

when you still can

for a little energy kills no one

but rather makes life a little brighter and worth living

PASS THAT CAN ROUND!

 

the 139 calories in that can

won't add to your weight

for you are all gonna laugh it off

one might not be enough

to make the day memorable

three does the best job, for its the lucky number

PASS THEM CANS ROUND!

 

laugh when you still can

jump, sing, skip or have a little dance

before they are ripped away from you

enjoy them get togethers

for its the memories that you will get to keep

SHARE THEM CANS!

 

FRIENDS, enjoy while you still can

for you dont know when they are claimed by this

fearless, greusome monster DEATH.

forever, never returning to share any moments with you

SHARE THE CANS WHILE YOU STILL CAN!

 

remember, enjoy now

to avoid regrets tomorrow

of what it might have been,

the "if onlys"

when you see them throught the casket mirror.

 

Author's Note

well i dont know what to say to you guys but you surely should enjoy those coca-cola cans or whatever cans when you still can!

Reviews

[Blue Ivory]

The girl sitting next to me in class was drinking it. That was a few minutes ago! She even passed it around, and I didn't ask for it, cuz I didn't wanna be lame :I I love coca-cola :3

[luviva]

lolzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz, thats great!!!
and dont be afraid to ask for it....
thanxx for passing by

[Lily Mae]

And now I want one after giving it up for 8 whole days now lol.. Water is my friend I keep saying lol.. Nice write..xo

[luviva]

thanxx MAE, and if water does it for you, then go for it..

[Lily Mae]

It doesn't but it's better for me lol...xo

[Sir Joseph]

Nice poem! however i must say i am more nostalgic for the glass bottles

[luviva]

ohhh anyway you can get that in plastic ones ryt?/

[Sir Joseph]

ryt??

[luviva]

that means right?

[Sir Joseph]

yea, you can get coke in plastic bottles too. either way this was a nice piece

[khalid]

although im not into soft drinks, i liked how you have penned this. i can relate to this nice poem but i will use some cups of warm tea instead..

[luviva]

yeh, the coc can can be replaced by whatever is your favourite

[AYVID N]

This is an unbelievably great poem reminding us of the fleeting nature of passing life and people. You have stated some poignant and inevitable truths simply and movingly.

I really appreciate this poetry full of basic wisdom.

[luviva]

thanxx D i really appreciate your sincere review.