keep calm and recieve me!

keep calm and recieve me!

A Poem by luviva
"

yeh this is for parents who are expecting students back home with results.

"

 

 receive me back,

just as usual..

open the door and plant a soft kiss on my cheek

offer me those nice smelling cookies of yours

 

dont send me back please,

try to understand 

let the door open, and i will walk in

with my results in my hand

 

i know i didnt hit that mark

you needed me to,

but that doesnt mean i wont hit it

the next time

 

i understand you are cross

not because you are pushy

but because you want the best for me

but just dont create a path for me

all i ask of you is

prepare me for any path.

 

© 2013 luviva


Author's Note

luviva
yeh not that i performed badly, but iam just writing this for those parents who are not really understanding when it comes to results...

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i think that comes from parents care and worrying about their kids. if you were a mother and your kid is at school, you wouldnt do less than what your parents are doing right know..at the same time, i believe in individual differences, we shouldnt expect our kids to be as we want them to be..

Posted 11 Years Ago


luviva

11 Years Ago

i knw... and i understand bt some are not willing to let their kids make their own decisions and i a.. read more
with such friendly manipulations, one would be crazy not to let you in.....

Posted 11 Years Ago


luviva

11 Years Ago

uhmmmm yeh i can be when i want to!!
thanxx H
We all need more than one chance and we all need more cookies ! I did not understand the last two lines, but that may be because it is past my bedtime..

Posted 11 Years Ago


luviva

11 Years Ago

LOLZZZZ GO YO BED SWTTY.. or else you might end up writing your dreams here.. but the last two lines.. read more
I agree a great message that I hope a lot of people will read.

Posted 11 Years Ago


luviva

11 Years Ago

thanxxx T
Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

My pleasure
This has a great message in it. Nice poem!

Posted 11 Years Ago


luviva

11 Years Ago

THANXXX honey always appreciate the visits

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luviva

KENT, Gillingham , United Kingdom



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