road to success

road to success

A Poem by luviva
"

yeh this is just what we all strive for in life ryt?? to be better off, have some worth.

"
where does it start?
where does it end?
is it a straight narrow or wide road?
is a winding stair case?
common questions asked but
still remain unanswered!

"where does it lead?"
An intresting, mind provoking
and thoughtfully intriguing question
which can only be answered by you!

yes, I ment you.
aha, why not?
since the answer lies beneath your skull.
yeah, in your brain.

we have seen many loose out
you know, after finding out where it led?
after touching the end mark.

once well known scholars,
the then big men in suits.
have turned from
wearing ties with suits
to weaping tears with shouts.

who were once chased by the dollars
now are the chasers.
hunting for it like they never once posessed it.
but why?

simple!
they forgot to keep on the chase
they thought they were there.
not knowing that they were holding on by the loose end.
they were only facing the nice aroma..
bfore tasting the real food.

so learn,
my friend..
never forget to feed the fire,
or rock that boat when you are there
out there on the sea.
never know what comes your way.
it might have accepted you at last.
but it will only take one strong wave
to wash you back to the shore.
and you will be telling the tales!!

© 2013 luviva


Author's Note

luviva
yeh sorry, i had posted it first with no body because WC was messed up. either that or my computer/..
all i can say is read, love en review.
LOVE YOU ALL

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Any time you bring food into the Alligory, Im all in !

Posted 11 Years Ago


luviva

11 Years Ago

ohhh thanxx paul
use all the gifts you are given waste nothing enjoy everything you never know when a wave can turn into a tsunami good write
thank you for sharing

Posted 11 Years Ago


luviva

11 Years Ago

thanxx holly and you are right!!
I enjoyed this probing and imaginative write, I felt quite invigourated afterwards, thank you

Posted 11 Years Ago


luviva

11 Years Ago

thanxx swetty enjoy your reviews as always!!:)
I dont see it posted:(

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Added on February 10, 2013
Last Updated on February 12, 2013
Tags: education, day to day life, etc

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luviva
luviva

KENT, Gillingham , United Kingdom



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