sweet lullabies

i just remembered this feeling when i listened to the traffic flow noises outside ma house.

     yeh #lullabies#

a whole bunch of them

from different singers.

dont know what that combination is called but I remember

that a mixture of different voices is called

"HARMONIES"

I also remeber that a song sang for a baby to go to sleep is a...

"LULLABY"

so given the fact that i fell asleep to the many songs from different

animals, you know this.. at sunset, when all creatures;

frogs, crickets,mallard ducks, tadpoles, mosquitoes,

YOU NAME IT!

start their evening calls to their mates to...

yeh that! so a collection of their songs would be called??

you dont know!

well i called it the

SWEET LULLABIES.

Author's Note

yeh.. this is a completely different turn i have taken with this from the first draft!
but all i can say is read, love en review!
LOVE YOU ALL

Reviews

[yusuf]

An interesting amalgamation of words and thoughts! I liked how you have framed it! Kudos to you my dear fellow poet. :)
do visit my works, would love to hear it from you. :)

[luviva]

will do been busy these days en ma read requests r filling up. but i will give u a thought. thanxx for the visit

[Paul Seaman]

a good thought, a natures Lullabies. I like the pacing on this piece.

[luviva]

thanxx paul..

[Kyle Sky]

great piece. There is always such feeling of comfort and ease in lullabies, and you've captured it greatly in this simple piece of poetry.

[luviva]

thanxx kyle...

[patricia]

Tolkien couldnt have put it better. You have captured the essence of all the familiarity that give our senses such comfort. Taking us all back or me at least to my own store of memories. Great work.

[luviva]

thanxx, en hey i really appreciate your words..:)

[scripted]

This was an interesting write... I love how you took something forgrtable and made it a memory. I think that gave it that creative feel I look for when I read a writing. Nice job!!! Thank you for sharing, yours truely Danielle

[luviva]

thanxx D u knw am always humbled by your reviews!
thanxx again

[Devanshu Rajput]

great write...lovely piece...keep writing...

[luviva]

thanxx D

[de_maruf]

fine

[luviva]

constructive!! thanxx

[Lover Of Words]

To get that from traffic is amazing! nicely done!

[luviva]

thanxx K

[khalid]

i do really love it..

[luviva]

thanxx KHALID..
real appreciate it

[Frieda P]

You got this from traffic? Genius! Love it luviva...nicely pen'd!

[luviva]

thanxx P,
yeh i actually did, you know i lived the first 15 years o ma life in a country. you know all the creatures listening to their songs and all. but when i moved here, i fell asleep to traffic flow noises!
thats where i got the idea from.

[Frieda P]

Ha, poets get inspirations from all different places...same here, I just recently moved, still can't get used to the bustle of a city at night.

[luviva]

i know..!!
enwe hope u get into swing with it and waiting on those poems you are writing..
read morei know..!!
enwe hope u get into swing with it and waiting on those poems you are writing..
or have you published it yet??

[Frieda P]

ha there's always something in the works, that's what one does when it's 4:10 AM and can't sleep!

[luviva]

hahahaa yeh i understand!