all clear

yeh this is a feeling i got when sitting behind a library window reading...

all clear,

clear as day

when viewed behind

your window!

 

without that boundary,

its all blurry...

when you walk it

it is scary!

 

its the city!

The city with no limits

when viewed behind your

window!

with the golden sunset

waving goodbye for the day

 

when the golden light

washes over it again at dawn

you feel the urge to walk it

with the arms swinging freely in the air

with your hair falling victim to the air

 

exploration being your only intention

early in the morning

round the corner,

there lies the

scariest scret of the city

 

all clear??

its never clear at the back streets

with all the bodies lying on the streets!

 

Author's Note

ok.. i dont know what you are gonna make of this but what i know is i wanna hear it!!

Reviews

[khalid]

i think it expresses how much nothing is ever clear in our recent life due to pollution in all fields. pollution of the air that makes the sky grey and stars are not clear, pollution of land that makes our food poisinous, pollution of water that is killing the marine life, and what is worse is pollution in thoughts and facts. there is no longer what is called clear fact these days. i started to doubt that the sun rises from the east..is it a fact that the place the sun rises from is the east? even does the sun really rise to us or its we who go twards it? anyway, nothing is clear these days although leaders try to tell us the fake truth..

[luviva]

lobe the pollution in facts and thoughts..
real great and thanxx for the review, as always i appreciate your visit!!

[khalid]

thank you, i enjoy my visit or i wouldnt..

[de_maruf]

valo

[luviva]

meaning??

[de_maruf]

nai

[Ahmad Cox]

It has a dark yet dream like rhythm that I like and appreciate.

[Frieda P]

Reminds me of NYC but I suppose it could be any big city....it runs with the hesitation of big city life and the wonderment of it also.

Got tripped up by the repetition of 'in the air, to the air' but other than that it's a captivating read.
'secret'

[luviva]

mind sharing the secret??

[Frieda P]

haahahahaa, the spelling i meant, can't tell you here anyway! ;-)

[luviva]

LOLZZZZZ........ dumb me..
i actually realised that it was a spelling mistake when i read it again when i had already commented/!!.. 4 de secrets u cant tell here..
dont worry inbox is for us!! LOL

[Angela ☄️]

I reeeeally like this, I picture this poem as a girl walking down the street in a sunny, perfect, and fun city only to realize at the end that the city isn't what it was ment to be. :)

[luviva]

yeh...
you got it!!
en thanxx for the review :D

[Angela ☄️]

Your welcome, I love reviewing other peoples work. :)