the walker

this is just one of those

he walks the lengths

of the streets

he is the timekeeper

for the street residents

 

early in the morning...

he wakes up and walk the

streets, like someone up

for a daily job.

 

he sees and hears

but never relays any

information to another person.

he is his own computer.

its all stored in his memory.

 

some people always ask him

what he really does..

but all he says is...

         IAM A WALKER.

 

just like him,

i also love to say

IAM A TRAVELLER!

walking the ends of the earth

till my journey comes to an end.

and i would continue living it in the ETERNAL LIFE.

 

yeh,

iam a traveller on this earth,

i dont need to kill her to gain her wealth

when am also going to die and leave it

just like you will leave that wealth you are

 accumulating yet you could help many needy people with it.

 

 

Author's Note

well this is an idea which came to me when going to sleep en thought about those walking the streets out there with no roof over their heads!!

Reviews

[khalid]

i really liked the expression of I AM A TRAVELLER. we are all travellers on earth. however we do, however long we live, whatever we have, whatever our ranks or positions are, we are all travellers. we are passengers who came to earth one day and we will leave it naked as we came to it. we are not better than who came before us, look how many came and they have gone, we are not away of that. it is how we were created. what really matters is what we lweave after us. if we leave money, it will go to others who will waste it. we should better leave nice reputation behind us when we leave. i believe that Allah(god) has distributed wealth equally on earth, earth gives us enough for the world population everyday but it is not equally distributed. food wastes in some wealthy countries is enough to feed needy people in poor countries..
i have really enjoyed reading this. sorry i talk too much but that is because this poem belongs to the type i love since it has a great message..
thank you

[luviva]

well never mind about howmuch you talk, as long as it makes sense.
this was a real constructive and well balanced view of the poem.
i real love it when you give such long reviews because 7 times out of 10 i learn something from them.
you are one person who writes about equality and un considerate politicians and me loving writing about ploitics and unfairness in our communities.. your views are real constructive.
anyway thanxx alot for the review.

[SHEEMA HUQ]

good observations of a rambler's vocations, here I think

[luviva]

thanxx for the though, en review..
appreciaate it!

[Danielle]

I really enjoyed this, it's unique and powerful, and personally for me relatable. Great!

[luviva]

thats gr8 if u can relate to it...#
thanxx for the review glad u enjoyed it:)

[Kyle Sky]

Humbling and simply wonderful. For those who walk this earth in search for a home, i can assure that this poem will shelter your spirit. Beautiful dedication.

[luviva]

thank you so much
real appreciate the visits!

[Siren]

I really enjoyed this one.

"I don't need to kill her to gain her wealth"

What a wonderful awareness of what is true treasure and how it should be handled. Thanks for sharing this with me.

[luviva]

you r welcome swttty:D

[Onyia-Ali, Kingsley Chu..]

I appreciate the form and structure of your poem. well done

[luviva]

thanxx

[Tarry Franck]

Lovely and compassionate ~~ well done.

[luviva]

thanxx

[kelvin]

travelers, walkers or whatever they maybe called, for yes some tend not to see the virtues of the things they possess, like a roof over their heads, food to eat,and so on when there's people who don't know where their next meal is even coming from nor the bench they slept on the night before is gone or occupied by someone else of the same issue of homelessness.its sad when someone can go win a lottery or power ball worth 40 million dollars and up and we have people out here starving with no homes when some of that can go to help our poor and needy, when millionaires having 10 rooms or more homes with only two children, not willing to help out our country's poor and needy. This is a reality in everyday life nice read here you laid this down nicely. As always keep writing fellow writer.

[luviva]

thanxx for your review and analytical skills..
it really does open up my eyes more, you know get tinking beyond the point that i had whne writing.,
and you are ryt, i agree with every single word in there!!
thanxx for the review

[kelvin]

You're very welcome very welcome and I'm glad you agree.

[MOON]

A compassionate write for the less fortunate.lovely sentiments.

[luviva]

thanxx moon

[scripted]

these kind of poems i love to read most... ones that allow me to see just how caring others can be. this was an absolutely beautiful poem, and i want to thank you for bringing reality to light!!!

[luviva]

thank you so much!!
real appreciate it

[AYVID N]

A very noble thought once we get the grip on it. Loved it and look forward to more.

[luviva]

well thts encouraging thanxx for those words, :D