I AM

this is about the planet, conservationsists should love this

                       I am,

                       thats all i know.

                          because I am!!

 

many resent me,

many can not stand

my presence

BUT I AM!!

 

And because I am,

you all live.

you don't realise that!

of course because...

you all simply live!

BUT I AM!!

 

you toss me round

play with me

and I let you, but remember

that it's me

and after all that,

I AM!!

 

you have done all you can.

to stop me from living

but why??

when you know that

I will be back!!

because I dont die

because I cant live you to

die.

 

for I mothered you

eversince you started living

so, because of that can you

give me a little bit of respect??

 

you put up a good fight,

burning the green, which i send to feed you

the rivers are all polluted..

when i cry, you rejoice...

but remeber you are putting up

a great fight!!

which you are to loose.. and i will win.

because i lived before all of you..

and i will live after you are all gone!!

Author's Note

i dont know about this/... there might appear to be spelling mistakes bacause the keyboard did the talking... just ignore the grammer and enjoy!!!

Reviews

[kelvin]

very good prospective on this read here Nature in all things in it will not die she continues to recycle herself when human do silly acts such as destroying bodies of water, littering, and forests and fires but in time she regenerates and back to life she comes sometimes even stronger.natural disasters are her way of baptizing the careless acts of humans cleansing and purging herself from the ones who do such destructive acts. but yet there will be more fights to be fought for her even when we're gone but as she regenerates and come back there will be more humans stepping up to doing the same acts against he till a change is made. this is a very powerful message to the ones who do the destructive things to earth. good read keep writing fellow writer

[luviva]

wow.. that was a great motivational review!!
you got the wider view of it better than those who just "love it"
thanxx for the review, its real appreciated!!

[The Refined Poet]

I definitely enjoyed this one. It had a flow to it.

[luviva]

Thanx for passing by

[beautiful dreamer]

i like it! great job!

[luviva]

thanxxx

[amarlaksh]

Well.. Quite enjoyable ! :)

[luviva]

thanxx A

[Danielle]

Very nice, yes too many of us take our beautiful planet for granted, we need to give respect to it. Nice work!

[luviva]

thanxx shia....
real appreciate your words

[AYVID N]

Destruction of our own Mother...Nature...
Oh yes! We'll pay and She'll still be around after we are gone...
A winning write as always Luviva!

[luviva]

thanxx DN real appreciate your visits..

[SHEEMA HUQ]

you have taken a clever creative stance on a subject matter which i feel is not completely obvious in your content, nonetheless, I enjoyed reading your poem, well done

[luviva]

thanxx,...... real appreciate it!

[Onyia-Ali, Kingsley Chu..]

Look, my friend, i enjoy this piece now, why, it remenbered me how my lecturer just taught me cosmics poem some days ago, that is the beginning of existence, this just appear to tell right now that man has been in existence and cannot die, thus there is an evidence of reincarnation.it just look like a hymn on man, and i known that this would be a piece that gave you the inspiration. I so much enjoy this poem. thank you. Great work.

[luviva]

thank you so much for your kind words..
real appreciate it!!

[patricia]

i like the viewpoint you wrote from in this, the idea was great. Enjoyed.

[luviva]

thank you soo much!!

[Lily Mae]

I love writes like this.. the inner power and movement forward in life..in love with yourself first and loving others around you with such vibrant energy.. Well written..xo

[luviva]

thanxx