co- existance.

yeh this is just about the collisions that are often created in society and we really need to compromise and live it out.

coexistance,

right we can literally live

together in mutual respect for eachother

even when the cultures clush.

 

clutures clashing

doesn't mean that you can't forget their clash

and live it out.

enjoy eachother's presence and capture the memories while

you still can.

 

coexistance is only natural;

the idea is portrayed even within us.

the inner soul at times contradicts with the mentality

when the inner soul prompts you to cry because you are hurt,

your own mentalitty might oppose that, because of the fear to be seen crying.

they always collide but they still can exist together.

given the fact that it's only natural.

 

seasons come and go

severe conditions that are unbearable

but it still happens.

amidst their changes...

they still coexist.

its not unusual for the sun to shine on a snowy day.

or even rain falling on a sunny day..

 

coexistance.,..

we really can coexist no matter

the differences....

we still can do it!!

so come on lets enjoy it while we still can!!

 

Author's Note

yeh, this i dont know what to say with it!!
it was just a random idea which occured to me on the first snow day of the season
when it shined minutes later after it had snowed!
hope you all my dear readers love it!!

Reviews

[DrD]

It rings like the platform of the United Nations but delivers a message needed throughout the world. We strive to coexist in the world when many cannot coexist within their own homes. This is a noble effort expressing what should be the best we have to offer and you did it in fine form and produced something well worthwhile to read.

[luviva]

ohhh thank you so much!!
my drive is to change people's perspectives from looking at the world as a globe divided into continents then countries, then districts and so on to looking at it as a one global community. with such encouraging reviews and constructive words i shall fully achive it!!

[David Scott]

I think we have no choice but to co-exist... That or perish... What would be great is to actually cooperate actively with each others well being. This can be simple but it has to start in each individual heart...
It will never happen... Nice thought though.

[luviva]

it will.. trust me as long as one recognises that there is need to corporate.. they will spread the idea. thats my only prayer!!

[David Scott]

I hope your right dear. I'll try and do my part. :-)

[Siren]

very interesting idea to try to capture in a poem. I really like it, and you make some really good connections throughout the pom. Good job!

[luviva]

thanxx siren!!

[Siren]

always welcome (:

[patricia]

interesting and thought provoking. Thanks.

[luviva]

thank you!!

[}Echo{]

Very true and powerful.Wonderful write. :)

[luviva]

thanxx my friend!!

[}Echo{]

:)

[Ahmad Cox]

So true and powerful message I wish more people could understand.

[luviva]

well they will.. time will come u knw...
thanxx for the review anyways..!:D

[khalid]

the one with the same meaning for me is ( We All Bleed Blood) which is a collab with Renee J. Marten..

[luviva]

will check it out!!

[khalid]

it is really strange, each time i read a poem for you, i find one of mine similar to it in meanings and message..that makes me respect your way of writing more and more day after day. i will not comment on the words picking or symbols or whatever because you are already a telent poet so of course you have treated all of such things in a professional way..
very nice poem with great message which all the world need now..

[luviva]

thank you soo much!!
i really appreciate your reviews

[khalid]

my pleasure always

[Frieda P]

Deep read, says so much about our mentality and tolerance as mankind. If only....

[luviva]

....?
anyway thanks for the reeview!!
real appreciate it

[Frieda P]

What?....? ;)