co- existance.

yeh this is just about the collisions that are often created in society and we really need to compromise and live it out.

coexistance,

right we can literally live

together in mutual respect for eachother

even when the cultures clush.

 

clutures clashing

doesn't mean that you can't forget their clash

and live it out.

enjoy eachother's presence and capture the memories while

you still can.

 

coexistance is only natural;

the idea is portrayed even within us.

the inner soul at times contradicts with the mentality

when the inner soul prompts you to cry because you are hurt,

your own mentalitty might oppose that, because of the fear to be seen crying.

they always collide but they still can exist together.

given the fact that it's only natural.

 

seasons come and go

severe conditions that are unbearable

but it still happens.

amidst their changes...

they still coexist.

its not unusual for the sun to shine on a snowy day.

or even rain falling on a sunny day..

 

coexistance.,..

we really can coexist no matter

the differences....

we still can do it!!

so come on lets enjoy it while we still can!!

 

Author's Note

yeh, this i dont know what to say with it!!
it was just a random idea which occured to me on the first snow day of the season
when it shined minutes later after it had snowed!
hope you all my dear readers love it!!

Reviews

[Danielle]

A powerful poem you have written here, I love the meaning of it, yes we can coexist, just wish it could be in a more peaceful way because we all bleed the same color. Love it!

[luviva]

thanxx.. real apprecate the words..

[AYVID N]

A very poignant and very serious thought. Unity must prevail in diversity and coexistence is an absolute must for survival of the human race and even the planet earth. My compliments to you for penning this crucial thought.

[luviva]

thank you so very much!!

[SHEEMA HUQ]

I felt moved and slightly disturbed by this poem ( in that I felt deeply for the writer's angusish and the intensity of feelings depcited). eventhough you have also included a philopshical stance on the subject matter, the author's choice ( your drive), to grapple with complex subject matters is quite overwhelming. Cultrual divisions ( and dealing with then generously and as fairly as possible, taking account of the effects on the soul and then making references to your own personal cuturual background ( I can only speculate here), amount to a memorable poem. Thanks.

[luviva]

well thats a real constructive review which has actually opened up my eyes about the poem. its given it ANother angle.
thanxx :D

[Tarry Franck]

You captured coexistance quite well and like amarlaksh said we are doing that right here on writerscafe. Great piece!!!!!

[luviva]

thanxx tarry.:)

[Tarry Franck]

You are quite welcomed

[Starfruitanimal]

i can see this as written word awesome s**t hunny nice work

[luviva]

thank you soo much!!

[amarlaksh]

Actually to think about it, we are "living" together here on writerscafe! Good Write!

[luviva]

yeh absoluetely. i agree with u!!
thanxx for the idea

[Onyia-Ali, Kingsley Chu..]

I must confess, this is a master piece of unity in diversity. the thought is vividly captured. Very nice one.

[luviva]

thank you so much!!

[kelvin]

Yes very nice read here using the opposites of nature to mentality and even we as people good ways to express that we can be quite ignorant to the fact of each other but still coexist. we are programed to coexist with all things on earth its just up to us to allow ourselves to.so instead of trying to destroy the the coexistence of the other why not try to learn and respect someones view. but other things where just meant to happen like when the sun shines the rain may say I'm tired of fighting ill come tomorrow you enjoy today sun and the next they may come out to play and have coffee together if you get what i mean this is a nice outlook here. oh and my poet friend reread you nice read here for you have a misspelled cultures and in the first part i don't know if you meant to say clash instead of clush. as always keep writing fellow writer

[luviva]

thank you so much!!
this is pretty good, constructive and encouragig.
am real hmbled by your reviews and honoured to have you as a friend!!
thanxx again

[kelvin]

i feel the same and you are very welcome

[scripted]

this is a poem thats is aimed at open mindedness, something all people will need to fully come together... i love the message behind it nice write

[luviva]

thank you..!

[C.C. Marx]

Nice message, its really important people understand things like this

[luviva]

absolutely ryt!!