stamina..!!

this is just one of those.!

stamina,

wait what did i

just say?

 

oh yeah, stamina

probably unheard of

nowadays..

peoples favourite where are you??

 

why to forsake your

people now?

when they are in most need of you

they cant stand their ground..

they are leaving all their reputations,

dignity and respect on the ground.

 

 

 

when the little man defeats them

just imagine that! ehh?

do you wanna come back now or

you are gone forever??

 

do you know hoe shameful it is??

when you get a great slide early in the morning??

the frozen ground resists their feet...

but they need the ground to walk

they are emptying all their bags in an attempt

to get you back.

but still you resist their charm.

 

LOL HAPPY SNOW SEASON, AND WATCH OUT FOR IT'S SLIPPERLY OUT THERE. 

 

Author's Note

This is about the snow and the rides/slides i ofeten get when walking 2 school in the morning. whatever type of boots or wellies you have, at some moment you will find your bottom on the ground!!
just have a laugh!

Reviews

[Onyia-Ali, Kingsley Chu..]

I enjoy how your days experience capture your imagination, the mental picture is well elaborated, indeed is good.

[SHEEMA HUQ]

I felt that this was an unusual poem, kind of focuses on the experience rather than the decription of the scene and cirumstances.....in fact had you not talked out your experience in your notes I may have stuggled to understand what the content was about....I laugh!!

SEASONS GREETINGS

[luviva]

well it was all about the feeling of someone who has slipped and the picture that a passerby gets!!
the fact they go out to buy expensive boots to hold there ground but still slip at times... it was one of those poems!!
enwe thanxx for the review!!

[Siren]

Very cool. You definitely create great poetry out of every day life. I like that talent in you. Great piece.

[luviva]

thank you so much/!! real appreciate it

[Siren]

always welcome (:

[kelvin]

hey watch out or you'll fall hahaha good read as always keep writing fellow writer

[luviva]

thank you :)

[luviva]

thank you :)

[kelvin]

you're very welcome

[Tarry Franck]

Nicely done :)

[luviva]

thanxxx :D

[beautiful dreamer]

lol i once slipped and fell so hard i bruised my tailbone. stupid ICE

[luviva]

i know!!.. its so sad!!

anyway thanxx for the review!!

[beautiful dreamer]

welcome

[DrD]

Hate snow. Hate winter. Hate radiators and antifreeze. Hat ear muffs and mittens. Hate snowmen. Hate Jack Frost. Hate blizzards. Hate sleet. Hate cold. I'll try to be more specific next time. By the way, Luviva, if it's zero degrees outside and tomorrow it will be twice as cold, how cold will it be tomorrow?

[luviva]

wowowow, u hate evrything about winter
anyway, thanxx for the review

[David Scott]

Well dear, I see a "few" errors with spelling, but I have a similar habit. This poem could actually be very deep and a call for all of us to be stronger and more resolute in our lives. I found it a challenge to me.
Thank you for this gift today.

[luviva]

thanxx for the review!!

[Danielle]

Lol! Very nice humorous poem

[luviva]

glad yyou loved it!!

[Ahmad Cox]

I have to admit it did bring a smile to my face when you actually gave the description of what you were actually talking about. I just finished posting 4 new poems I think you might appreciate as well.

[luviva]

will check them out...
this was just an idea i got when i almost slipped one day when i went out of my house!!

[Ahmad Cox]

Nice. Great write